Thanks Steve, I'll take any feedback as constructive. I've got Mallory next which I'll practice lines on and then look at what to do next. It would be nice to see if I can save significantly more time as I'm stuck at 1:50 at the moment, while there are guys on 600's doing 1:45's.
@SimonRR & Paul, the photos are up http://www.alexjamesphoto.com/event...62ed5e#photo=677ec3f1956351f3d0b520ca24b55354